Two Poems by Tom Pitre
A small machine
in a deep fold
of my brain
lifts each corner of my mouth in turn
and I smile at the pretty woman
behind the counter.
A whisper
automated
sends a spark to my chest,
and I let go
all the charm
I can muster
as the worm in my groin
stirs, recoils,
from the electricity
of this unfamiliar arena.
A feeling, not unlike
hunger
fear
paints the inside of
my stomach.
Her teeth are
straight and white.
Her eyes reflect
something from the inside
I’d never seen.
I am validated.
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Family Gathering
I was picked up
by one leg
dropped hard
onto the middle
of the living room.
I sat there for a long time
looking at the flocked wallpaper.
A lady in a bright, red dress
joined me,
sitting quietly,
expressionless,
staring straight at me
her legs opened in a wide
“V”
her back straight and stiff.
Two little kids and a dog
joined us.
A boy, about ten
a girl, five.
The dog was
solid black.
His mouth was open
as if to bark, but
I couldn’t hear anything,
only the adenoidal breathing
of the little girl
playing
with her doll house
and
creating her own
little family gathering
in the living room of a
tiny cardboard house.
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Tom Pitre’s questions:
1) Does either poem resonate with you?
2) Can you see/fee what is going on?
3) Do these strike you in a particular way?
4) Do you say to yourself, “I get it?”….as I do when I read Heather McHugh…
Tom Pitre’s blog: http://fifthcoffee.blogspot.com
Reply directly to the poet: jmurray9 (at) gmail (dot) com
Yes, I “get” the first poem. I love the last line “I am validated.” Good work!